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I answered truthfully.
Anyways, top-notch quiz.
It was easy to cheat and get a 50, because the best scoring answers were always to the far right. (Opposite for worst score)
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Funny, perfect animation, top-notch sound.
Pure Awesome.
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~Plot~
Story was great. Ran smoothly with the last episode. The cut-off for the next episode was okay. Be sure to have some original ideas.
~Art & Design~
This part really saved the movie. Art was excellent. It looked like you spent a lot of time on the background and characters.
~Animation~
Here's where you lost points. The frame rate still looks like doing it at 12fps. You really need to work on that. Make the character interact quicker. Halfway, there was some noticeable pauses between dialogue. Lip sync was okay.
~Other~
The scene selection was a great touch. And the Character Bios were awesome! I really hope you keep those features in the next one.
~InnerChild548
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it! I hope you'll be back to see the improvements for episode 4! And glad you noticed the extras and improvements since our last episode!
-Taco Buttfish.
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I read your story, and I support your cause!
And the animation was pretty nice. The music mainly did it; it was fun. Your text was basic, but still good.
Anyways, you seem pretty cool, so 10/10!
Author's Response:
Cool man, i'll tell you how it went on my userpage tomorrow, thanks!
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Haha, funny AND educational.
Even if it is kind of silly, it was smoothly animated and easy to understand.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review man. I tried to design it so a child can understand it :P
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I beat it. It was amazing. The twist at the end was phenomenal, almost made me cry. Such a cool concept. The pixel design worked very well. Gameplay was enjoyable. The game uses a bit more brain-power than other action games. The bosses were challenging. The ending gameplay was clever. I usually never get this much satisfaction from a game. It was worth all my time.
This game is perfection.
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Best St. Patrick's Day Flash on Newgrounds, and I found the fishy! But something puzzles me. You're drinking, but you're only 20...
Aw, who cares, it's six more days 'till St. Patty's Day!
Author's Response:
well the drinking age in several countries is 18
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Right from the beginning of Episode 2 I could see you were using the Dragon Ball Z theme with the old man, young kid with powers, and the monster with the rough, scratchy voice. The reason why it worked so perfectly is because you combined it with new art. Making a fun, familiar theme with intriguing new characters. Follow the rhythm of that.
What was the frame rate, 14? It seemed awfully slow. Although your art skills dazzling, your animator abilities don't look too sharp.
The voices were okay. Sound quality was poor, but I know you don't have complete control over it. I do so wish your equipment gets better.
The plot seems to be doing okay. You are ending the episodes well.
I believe that wraps it up. I hope to see exponential improvement in the next chapter. I promise I'll see it; I never stop watching a series mid-way.
~InnerChild548
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it, and yes, we were definitely inspired by the great Akira Toriyama and his series. And we take this series very seriously, so you'll see the equipment and the end result of each product get better and better with time. So, see you for Episode 3 sometime this month (March)!
-Taco Buttfish.
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The plot was bit boring. You constantly tried to set the scene, but it's already set. If you were going for suspense then you failed. Not to mention you fighting scenes were terrible. I can see action animating is not your strong suit. The art was good but not perfect.
6.5/10
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Wow, it may have had no plot to it, but that did not stop it from being a smoothly animated movie. I like how it was dedicated to your friend. I don't support the theme, but I wouldn't rate that because it would be unjust.
In short, excellent animation.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you saw through the theme, and rated it fairly. Much obliged to have such a great reviewer.
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