Score: 10

"Aww"

submission: Jujube Lock v. Ban Day

date: October 31, 2009

Your kitty is adorable!

~SunshineLock

Score: 10

"Good try, buuuut"

submission: LL - Unexpected

date: October 25, 2009

Put the loader in a separate scene. Put more detail in the background, make sure you cut it off so we don't see it. The sidewalk is off perspective. Subtitles would be nice. Give more time between "Happy Bay Day" and "Oh Shit". Sound effects is a plus. Your "Bam" was one frame of an explosive.

Happy Ban Day!

Score: 10

"Haha"

submission: LL - Exorcist

date: October 25, 2009

You're such a great animator-- and comedian, because it was so funny.

And I found the easter egg, too. Haha, poor Squash.

Happies Ban Day!

Score: 10

"SunshineLock"

submission: LL - Squash's Message

date: October 24, 2009

I guess this is your Ban Day resolution.

Nice Flash!

Score: 10

"HAHAHA"

submission: [LL] - Forehead

date: October 24, 2009

Honestly, I thought your forehead was quite moderate in size.

Score: 10

"lol"

submission: Hangover Programming

date: October 12, 2009

Pretty funny.

By the way, you forgot to end the function, however did it compile?

And you only defined it, not called.

Just kidding, decent Flash.

Score: 8

"Slightly Under Par"

submission: The Stickman1

date: October 4, 2009

I first one I would have to say it the best. Each one after seem to get more and more unrealistic; as if the stickmen were in space. During these "anti-gravitational" movement you may want to try speed up the movement. But of course I am no expert on the matter. Just try tweaking it on your next to see what seems natural.

As for the buttons, they were a decent thought. Each one completely differing from the last might have set me off. Perhaps the point of them was to allow time for the viewer to play with the two "easter eggs", the ones where you roll over and/or press on the stickman during each movement intermission.

In summary I didn't think it was too bad for a first submission. The only real criticism I can give to you in this situation is too keep practicing.

Happy animating.

Score: 3

"Low variety; Slow; Repetitive."

submission: Cyto-Life

date: September 28, 2009

A have always been a big fan of Evolution/Biology games, but this was a disappointment. First of all, the pace of the game starts out really slow, not that isn't much of a problem, but even at max speed & agility upgrade you can't really even go that fast. I expected a wide variety of choices but this game is very limited. You can either eat or kill (which is basically eating). There are only two species of enemy. The blob objects were nice though as well as the rest of the graphics, but that's just about the only pro. And another thing, when you choose to evolve, the screen takes an annoying time to load. And what was the purpose the egg? It didn't "hatch" or follow you or even combine. I guess what I am trying to say is, THIS IS BORING. Hardly any content. As soupflavoredsoup said, it turns into a pattern--Collect, Avoid, Upgrade, Repeat. And only 14 levels. Meh, not worth the time I've spent on it.

Score: 10

"OMG OMG OMG"

submission: Goth Lyfe Season 3 Intro

date: September 28, 2009

The Goth Lyfe series was some of the first Flashes I've ever seen on Newgrounds. It's been years since, and it seems as though the long awaited season 3 is finally coming through. I have high hopes for this. One thing I have noticed about this series is that although animation is mediocre to decent. Plot and humor is what keeps it together. I see sneaks of interesting episodes in this "Intro" and it looks like some wild adventure the gang is up for. Once again, I really excited for the launch of season 3 and will keep an eye on the portal for it.

Also, have you considered using Flash Ads to profit from this? If not, I highly recommend it.

And everyone else be sure to recommend all following episodes to the series page.

Goth Lyfe <3

Score: 9

"Not Bad!"

submission: Escape from the Madness

date: September 22, 2009

I beat it. It's actually really easy to cheat with tab. You forgot to disable it. Art is swell. More enjoyable than most escape games for some reason. Really good.

Great job!