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I have watched this multiple times and it still amazes me. To start off, the animation is tops, absolutely fantastic. The plot is solid in length, conflict/resolution and a nice morale too. I truly admire how you play a background song in your scenes--it really sets the mood. Shame the voices are in Russian. I have to read the subtitles in conjunction with the animation, which make it uncomfortable to watch. But I know it's not fault. Besides, it gets easier the more I rewatch it though. The voice quality was great! Overall, this animation is outstanding. Can't wait for your next Flash.
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The level of animation was golden. And the commentary was absolutely hilarious because it was a parody of how real commentators try to sound profound. And the author's responses to those were so clever.
In other words, so fucking funny. Great job.
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Although the graphic animation was mediocre, it was indeed funny.
Congrats on this year treasure hunt.
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Your kitty is adorable!
~SunshineLock
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Put the loader in a separate scene. Put more detail in the background, make sure you cut it off so we don't see it. The sidewalk is off perspective. Subtitles would be nice. Give more time between "Happy Bay Day" and "Oh Shit". Sound effects is a plus. Your "Bam" was one frame of an explosive.
Happy Ban Day!
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You're such a great animator-- and comedian, because it was so funny.
And I found the easter egg, too. Haha, poor Squash.
Happies Ban Day!
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thanks sunshine!
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I guess this is your Ban Day resolution.
Nice Flash!
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Honestly, I thought your forehead was quite moderate in size.
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No way bro my forehead is HUGE!
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Pretty funny.
By the way, you forgot to end the function, however did it compile?
And you only defined it, not called.
Just kidding, decent Flash.
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I first one I would have to say it the best. Each one after seem to get more and more unrealistic; as if the stickmen were in space. During these "anti-gravitational" movement you may want to try speed up the movement. But of course I am no expert on the matter. Just try tweaking it on your next to see what seems natural.
As for the buttons, they were a decent thought. Each one completely differing from the last might have set me off. Perhaps the point of them was to allow time for the viewer to play with the two "easter eggs", the ones where you roll over and/or press on the stickman during each movement intermission.
In summary I didn't think it was too bad for a first submission. The only real criticism I can give to you in this situation is too keep practicing.
Happy animating.
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Danke!
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